To a Waif
Come to me, my waif, my angel,
Let me wipe those tears
Let me soothe your fears.
be your harbour whilst you heal.
Tell your story if you wish,
I am there, I will hold
whilst stormy tales are told.
Until your cracking heart is cleansed.
Then rock you gently
as healing tears fall.
Like a willow in golden light
You will again dance free,
lift head and arms to the sky.
Free again. Unchained.
I pray you will trust anew,
dare reach out a hand
and I pray it will be mine.
c/ miriam ivarson
This is such a lovely poem, Miriam. I found myself really hoping everything would turn out okay.
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So very sweet of you Robbie, thank you for this lovely comment.
I wrote the poem this morning, under the trees in a beautiful place.
In all that peace it just came forth. The subconscious is tricky. 🤗 .
miriam
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Such kindness offered to one in need.
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Thank you Sharon for the caring thought.
And what we be without kindness in this world. 🌻🦋
miriam
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This is beautiful!
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Thank you, I am glad you felt so.
miriam
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You’re welcome, Miriam
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What a beautiful, tender, and uplifting poem Miriam.
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Thank you Brad, for your beautiful comment. It is most welcome.
miriam
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My pleasure. Did you write the poem for anyone in particular? It feels very intimate and personal.
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Brad, I wondered the same myself and am trying to let my subconscious
tell me. I do recognise a couple of words that give a hint but maybe it
just is for all who felt this pain and met warmth. 🌻
Miriam
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A waif and an Angel…this doesn’t seem to be a real person! While your kind words offer solace, I wonder which abstract entity is guiding your thoughts? Quite an abstract poem Miriam, with surreal beauty. 🙂
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😊 , well Balroop, I will be honest here. I have been called both … each person experience any of us in different ways. The entity that gives the poem and the solace sounds like a haven to dream.
Thank you also for your beautiful final sentence.
Miriam
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This is a lovely poem
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Thank you for your lovely comment, I am glad you felt so.
miriam
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So sweet 😍🤗
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Thank you so much. 🤗
miriam
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My pleasure Miriam
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Someone would love this embrace, Miriam.
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Thank you Jaqui, you are right. I for a ne would like the hand and embrace
when I feel little. Don’t most of us come there from time to time. 💕 .
Miriam
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So beautiful and so much compassion and kindness in your poem, Miriam. The picture is so cute.👍👍👍👍👍
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I am glad you can feel this, Kamal. Compassion and kindness I see as the
important corner stones in our lives. I found that cute picture on Pixaby and
felt it showed care and nearness.🦋🌼 .
miriam
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Yes your poem was so beautiful, Miriam. Great to hear that.😊😊😊😊
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Beautiful, Miriam. Could be an ode to the Inner Child. 💕
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Ahh … Bela, what a beautiful title you have thought of. Warm thanks for your
special comment.
Miriam
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❤️
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Such a wonderful poem my friend.
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Thank you so much Jerry for this warming comment.
And for calling me friend. 😊 .
miriam
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Miriam, a stunning poem that touches the heart of all who have luck to read it. The gentlest of hymns to all waifs out there … that they are not alone, there is always someone ready to hold, listen ‘Until your cracking heart is cleansed.’ Sublime, confident and empathetic poetry that reaches into the core of very selves! Well done … I always know I will leave your blog with my spirit enriched! Xx
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Annika, your beautiful and deep comment touches my heart. Thank you.
How right you are, to all ‘ waifs’ out there, you are not alone, someone will be there. You have put this so perfect, Annika.
Altogether your ‘ review’ of my poem has left me uplifted so if I in any way
can enrich your spirit it is a blessing.
Miriam
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Such a comforting poem. We all need to be held like this sometimes. And sometimes we are strong enough to be the holder and comforter. The picture intrigues me. I imagine she looks at the dawn which always comes after the darkness. She is cleansed and healed, ready for something new.
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Thank you JoAnna for this wonderful response. You are so right, the caring and comforting should go both ways. Be there when needed.
When you come to the last picture I can only say, I am grateful. That is what
I am inferring. 💕 .
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Comforting and touching Miriam, lovely.
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Thank you so much, Andrea. It gladdens me to hear you can feel this
through the words.
Miriam
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Such a gentle, soft, comforting and welcoming place for anyone who needs a shoulder to lean on, with wordless story, even. Just sit and be embraced and let the tears cleanse the soul. Great poem, Miriam
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Thank you Miriam for your beautiful response. I am touched by your
understanding. We don’t always need so many words, our actions can
speak so much stronger.
Miriam
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What a beautiful poem, Miriam! It reminds me of my mother, and how much I miss her. Thank you, even though tears fall once again as I wish she were here.
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Thank you Julie for this sensitive comment. I do so sympathise with you about missing your
mother and have been there and still do. The poem wasn’t written with this in mind but I do love how
both poetry and literature can give so different to each one.
The main point is that it gives and I am grateful to you for sharing that.
Miriam
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Mariam I hope I was that Angel. How beautifully You bring that soothing effect to the Angel…. That is why.
😁
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Thank you Shiva, to bring that soothing effect to others is
a deep gift of kindness and human love. You feel the longing
to be so and that is a great sign.
Miriam
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You do have that gift Mariam.
Hats Off!!!
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Ahh …Shiva, how beautifully said. I obviously hadn’t understood which way you meant. 😊🙏 .
Miriam
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Wait I shall come to your Blog once again to finish all the blogs I have not read….
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my dear inner waif
is feeling your
caring relief, Miriam 🙂
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Such a beautiful, poetic response
and how it lit my heart.
Thank you David
miriam
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This is beautiful.
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Thank you Ken, your comment makes me glad.
miriam
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