THE CLOUD
The cloud came down to rest on Earth.
It travelled so far, was filled
with water, ashes, sand and air;
Ready to drop its burden soon.
Not here said the sunbather
Here, said the farmer;
Go to Sahara said the third.
Confused, the cloud cried and lost it all.
The conflicting desires changed its calm.
Should we possibly just accept
Today is cloudy or sunny or rainy.
Not selfishly thinking of just us
however tempting that might be.
The poor cloud had just been floating about
doing what clouds do
Without attachment to thoughts.
© miriam ivarson
Today will be hot they say, and there’s not a cloud in the sky. Nice to think they get time out, isn’t it?
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Thank you Jenanita , yes, the poor clouds need a break.
We are also having clear blue sky with unusual heat for the north. 😊.
Yet, we can’t do without them……
Miriam
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no shortage of clouds here…always most welcome
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A good mix of cloud ( rain) and sun is my favourite. We need them both.
Just like the clouds within will burst at times and all of a sudden the sun smiles.
miriam
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A metaphor for so many things. Thank you, Miriam.
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Thank you, Jaqui!
It is indeed meant to be a metaphor for many situations in our lives. 🤗
Miriam
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I love that image, Miriam, of the cloud crying – doing what clouds do.
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😊 I am so glad you like the image, Roland.
At times we might need to do like the cloud, just cry … until we see the sun again.
Miriam
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A lovely metaphor for accepting what comes and appreciating both the good and the bad.
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Andrea, a warm thank you for your true comment. To be able to appreciate both isn’t
that easy. It seems the only way to harmony though.
Miriam
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A beautiful picture of a lonely cloud that keeps on moving all alone in the sky. Lovely poem, Miriam.
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Thank you, Kamal, for your lovely comment. Sometimes there is one lonely cloud and
at times frightening big bulk of them. Hmm….
Miriam
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Yes completely true and agree totally with your words Miriam ❤️❤️❤️❤️ welcome
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A very nice metaphor that covers so much… jc
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Thank you, JC, for your interesting comment. Glad you liked the metaphor, it is meant
to cover a variety of daily situations……🦋.
Miriam
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It’s so hard not to attach to our thoughts.
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Thank you so much, Kate, it is indeed hard not to attach thoughts at all times.
It is worth practising though as we really can’t live in yesterday nor tomorrow.
I hasten to say that I have a long way to go. 😊.
Miriam
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Very beautiful.
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Thank you so much, I love your appreciation. 🌻.
miriam
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🙂🌎🌅
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Wonderful poem and photo, Miriam! ❤ xo
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Thank you, Bette, for your appreciative comment. Makes me smile this morning. 💖.
miriam
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Wonderfully touching poem, I truly felt sorry for the poor cloud and ended up saying ‘You go and rain wherever you want to sweetie,’
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Thank you, Roger, for your beautiful comment.
I am sure the little cloud took your advice next time around.
Welcome on my window, it is lovely to see you.
Miriam
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Thank you Miriam
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Evocative and thought-provoking poem! If a cloud feels the burden, it must be the personification, for clouds never get confused, they are an epitome of freedom, which doesn’t carry any caveats. 🙂
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Thank you, Balroop! The first line of your comment makes me glad. Isn’t this what we
hope for in writing. Provoke thoughts and emotions. I know how it started it off but when
I came back to read the poem again a few days later I saw a number of metaphors.
So my wish is that each reader can draw something that feels right for them.
Miriam
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As someone who loves to watch the clouds, I really enjoyed this Miriam. Your poem is beautiful!
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Jill, a warm thank you for your lovely comment.
The clouds are both relaxing to watch and give us time to know what we feel.
Miriam
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What a lovely poem with many clever metaphors, Miriam. This line stood out for me:
“Should we possibly just accept Today is cloudy or sunny or rainy.” There are times or situations where we simply have to accept the way things are because we are not in control. Then again, if something doesn’t seem right, do we just accept, or do we express our disagreement? These few words can easily tie into the civil unrest in our country. I also love how you personified the cloud, allowing your readers to feel empathy. And sometimes it would be freeing to not have attachments to thoughts. 🙂 This would be a good discussion piece for a group. Have a good weekend. 💗
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Thank you, Lauren, for your interesting and appreciative comment.
It is interesting and satisfying to me that you can see these words as a basis of discussion.
You mention civil unrest … and more .., here I have no doubt. Our voice, each vote and
word matters.
When it comes to nature’s manifestations I feel we can but work with it. Or watch in awe and silence. 😊.
miriam
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When I saw this photo, I gasped at how beautiful it is. What a relief it is when we just let things be, especially the things we cannot control, like clouds. Amazing and wondrous clouds.
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Thank you, JoAnna, you are in tune with the clouds. What can we do but watch with
acceptance and wonder. We have had many days with heat and some fluffy clouds.
Today the sky is covered with darker one and gentle rain is watering the earth.
miriam
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Miriam, A very beautiful, yet poignant poem. “…drop its burden soon.” You are right, some welcome the rain and others suffer with the rain. Acceptance and non-attachment is a healthier state of mind.💕
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Erica, thank you for your lovely and wise words.
It isn’t easy to find such acceptance and non-attachment but it would give
more peace of mind. 💕.
miriam
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AMAZING WORK
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Thank you, Nancy, for your appreciative words. 😊.
miriam
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Lovely Miriam. It is indeed true that people are never happy with what they have and always want things to be different.
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Thank you, Robbie, for your wise comment.
Could there possibly be a bit of a selfish streak hidden somewhere.
Or are we just talking weather.
Miriam
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I think a lot of people are definitely selfish, Miriam, and it extends to much more than the weather.
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Hello Cloud! After Miriam’s wise reflections I will welcome you with open arms! 😀
Miriam, a poem penned with the lightest of touches, it’s brimming with a light sense of humour that tickles my heart yet the deeper message beneath falls upon my soul! Love it so much and one that will stay with me!
Keep well and safe, my friend! ❤️
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Annika, on behalf of the Cloud I say thank you for your kindness. 🤗.
I am so Happy for your beautiful comment. So glad too that you felt the sense between humour and seriousness. Your own deep touch enhances my thoughts. 💕.
miriam
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Ah….now I know why the clouds here are just floating by 🙂
Every cloud has a silver lining and your evocative composition perfectly complements the picture.
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Thank you for your beautiful response, Radhika.
It is such a pleasure that you find the poem evocative.
Miriam
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Loved this! Very creative. 💜
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Thank you, Bela, for your happy appreciation. 💕.
miriam
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Love that the metaphor stands for so much and it’s relatable. For me, it’s a reminder to practice “radical acceptance.” Thanks for sharing your beautiful words ❤️
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Thank you for your deep and lovely comment. I feel glad that you took
in the core of the words and made them yours. Acceptance is really a major
part of this poem. 💕.
Miriam
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It can be quite distressing to listen to so many conflicting advice and opinion. It is good for one to know who she/he is for, and do accordingly (unless of course, his/her purpose is inherently bad).
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Thank you, Imelda, for your very interesting comment. Yes, so many conflicting opinions really can make you cry. We are a bit like the poor little
Cloud and need to learn to listen to our own convictions. Tough at times.
Miriam
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You have been enjoying Summer, staring at the ether? I love clouds. B
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Hi , B, clouds are fascinating and sort of personable.
The summer just seemed to flow away down some rapid of non planned events. Still, there is beauty in so much.
Thank you for you ur comment
Miriam
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