I did post a rather serious but hopefully positive poem last week
so felt that something gentle and warming was in order.
As it happens there was a prompt some weeks ago and I felt tempted
for the first time; I must admit that I have only written three poems
where the title was given. This prompt though rang well with me. It was called “ Lines in the Sand”.
My version is romantic and hopefully will warm your hearts.
Lines in the Sand
We drew lines in the sand,
you and I
after walking hand in hand
along the ocean front,
seeing so many wrinkles in the sand;
Lines that little waves made.
Our hearts filled with song
as our eyes met and held,
deep and questioning,
but shy of our love,
looking at life forms in the sand,
angel crabs, shells and such,
all the while wondering how to say;
I love you.
A stick of flotsam, no two
drifted in to the strand,
we picked one each
And wrote in the sand,
I love you.
© miriam ivarson
This is wonderfully sweet and romantic, Miriam. It can be daunting to dare to say, “I love you,” but actions show how one feels. Definitely warmed my heart to read.
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Thank you Sharon for your positive comment. It can indeed be daunting to
say ” I love you” , especially when that feeling comes from deep within.
Small actions can at times say more than words. Combined they are strong.
miriam
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Very beautiful.😊
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Thank you so much John.
miriam
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Definitely romantic Miriam and heartwarming . Sometimes no words are needed, just simple actions and gestures. 💕
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Thank you Miriam for your warm comment. Words are wonderful but
without the right actions they are not anchored.
miriam
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I love the tesselations in the top picture. Glorious lines.
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Thank you Jaqui, it is rather beautiful how the waves create these lines.
I am sure you also walked on similar.
miriam
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Feeling the love and sharing… Beautifully done, Miriam. ❤ xo
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Thank you so much Bette and thanks for your kind compliment. ❤️.
miriam
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A delightfully gentle and romantic poem, Miriam that touches my heart. The warmth of the your words floats over us all, as we follow the couple in the beach, watching the ‘so many wrinkles in the sand‘. How perfect that the two sticks are there to help them express the words they cannot utter … tender and moving!
The images match the post wonderfully and yours is a magical seascape composition on shimmering purple!
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Thank you Annika for your beautiful comment, I am so glad you liked the poem and followed the walk. Yes, isn’t it magic how these sticks appear just when they are needed. Imagination can create quite some dreams at times.
I am also so glad you liked the images. It isn’t always easy to find something suitable. 💕🦋 .
miriam
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Lovely thoughts Miriam. I am moved by the first picture…so rare and unique! Love is like sand, slipping away unawares yet even few moments when one can say those magical words are enough! 🙂
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Thank you Balroop, I am so glad you liked the picture and the poem.
Love deeply felt can be strong and enduring. I feel it all depends on the
foundation on which a relationship is built. 😘 .
miriam
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Lovely poem Miriam.
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Thank you. 😊 .
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❤
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Just loved the poem Miriam – simple words which mean so much and three special words which are the most important in the English language.
If only they were applied and followed more in this world…
Mike
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Thanks for your wonderful response Mike. Sometimes it is the simple
words that speak from the heart. You are so right about the three most important words.
They come with more caution when they really mean so very much.
Or easily thrown out but not from the depth of your being when not really meant.
miriam
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This put a smile on my face and in my heart. Well done!
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There you go Bernadette, can’t be all wrong then.😊
Thank you.
miriam
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Yes, very romantic, Miriam. Lovely poem and images 🙂
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Thank you Diana, glad you liked the poem.
miriam
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Oh, my heart! Such beautiful and romantic words. I love it. ❤
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Thank you Jennifer for your beautiful comment. 💕 .
miriam
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It struck me, while reading, that each person can project their own experience onto your images: the love of God, the love of people, of pets and even of poetry.
Nicely done,nicely done.
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Thank you so much, your comment is very interesting. You are right,
We can project what feels important to us.
The same thought came to me when I heard Bishop Curry’s address today.
miriam
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I agree Miriam. I thought that Bishop Curry was saying exactly what all people on this earth need to hear, believe and, more importantly, act on. There’s a lot of lip service to “loving-kindness”. As a human, with an ego, I continually have to remind myself to be loving . . . even when I’m irritated. Ain’t always easy.
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A beautiful and warming piece of poetry Miriam. I love the feelings and images your words evoke. Is there anything better than being on a beach with a loved one and sharing that oneness with nature? Thank you for providing this great start to the week.
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Davy, thank you for your generous comment and I am so glad that the poem
evoked positive feelings and images. To walk a beech is special I feel as you have both sea, earth and sky surrounding you and as you say, provide
the feeling of oneness with nature.
miriam
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This is beautiful. I love how you’ve turned the thought of lines in the sand into something romantic, when a line in the sand can have negative connotations too. It’s much better to turn it all around with love.
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Sheila, thank you for such a positive comment, you know how heartwarming
that is. Negative connotations didn’t occur to me, funny that. Will think on it.😊 .
miriam
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This is such a lovely response to the prompt, Miriam. Your poetry just goes from strength to strength.
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Thank you Robbie for such a generous comment. I saw it now at the
end of a very challenging day so you raised my spirits. 🤗 .
miriam
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you show how gentle love can be when two souls collide, this really warmed my heart
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A warm thank you for your comment Gina and welcome to my writings and pondering.
You see the gentleness and depth of these two souls meeting, I am so glad.
bless
miriam
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I plan to read more of your posts as soon as I can get to it. you have some beautiful writing Miriam.
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Miriam, You’ve beautifully captured that moment, when one or both, suddenly ‘know’ and have an overwhelming desire to express their feelings but it is a knife-edge because such a thought expressed is a make or break thing. Either it’s welcome and reciprocated or not, and not usually ends whatever there was. Tread careful young lovers !
Thank you Miriam.
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Nigel, thank you for your wonderful comment. It is great that you can feel
this moment so strongly through my words. It just occurred to me that it is
a sort of ” knife-edge” when you send out your writing into the ether.
A bit of your heart every time. See, another poem on the go because of your comment.
Now, young lovers….they are often as clear as older ones.😊 .
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You wrote a beautiful, romantic response to the prompt, Miriam, and the photos are perfect for your words. A heartwarming poem that touches all who have fallen in love and experienced that first, “I love you.” ❤
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Thank you Lauren for your sweet comment, it makes me happy that you liked the combination of words and photos. You are right, without having known love it is difficult to imagine those breathtaking moments.
miriam
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My heart did a little pitapat as I read this lovely poem, Miriam. And the top image is stunning ❤️
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Thank you Tina, pitapats are good when they are caused by happy events.😘 .
miriam
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This is so sweet, Miriam! There’s nothing quite like walking along the beach with a loved one, and sharing the sentiment in such a simple yet powerful way. Thank you for sharing!
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Julie, thank you for your happy comment. Like all of us I love sharing and to hear how all the people in the village feel about my words…..as I like to listen to yours.
Walking the beach, yes…why does that sound so good.💕 .
miriam
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Beautifully romantic poem, Miriam! These lines in the sand are the most wonderful there are. 😊
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Thank you Sarah, now I know you are a romantic:) Aren’t we all deep down.
Longing for the near contact of a soul mate.
miriam
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I believe so! Have a lovely evening, Miriam! 😄
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This is what going to the ocean is all about! I love it.
dwight
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Thank you Dwight, I am glad to find another ocean lover. And romantic.
miriam
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Guilty on both counts!
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As I read this again, I think of so many ways one could take this title and create interesting poetry… Well done! I love it.
dwight
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Well Dwight, now you have to create your version.😊 . I would love to hear it.
Glad you liked mine enough for a re-read.
~ miriam
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Finally a little quiet time to enjoy the fruit of your labour. This poem is so sweet.
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Thank you Br. May we all find these sweet and deep moments in life.
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Delightful poem, Miriam!🍀
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Thank you Luisa, I am glad you felt so.
miriam
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